Name 987-123-001 March 31, 2020

Dear William,

I’m writing to apply for the position of Commissioned Officer in the United States Air Force. I have thirteen years of experience organizing my colleagues at work and planning how to go to the Army force duties and responsibilities. It is my goal to improve the quality of life for all subordinate soldiers by working in teams. My professional expertise aligns closely with the duties outlined in the Commissioned Officer job description.

In my role as a Technical Sergeant, I proved to be a problem solver, reliable, and robust leader. I was able to develop careers for all enlisted personnel under my supervision. I ensured that all soldiers performed their duties accurately and correctly. Through my leadership, the mission goals were attained, and soldiers maintained technical competency. The overall work performance significantly increased as soldiers worked commendably in teams to achieve goals. I worked closely with other departments in the military to support the unit activities. As a result, the overall performances of soldiers increased drastically.

Besides, the following skills will enable me to lead Enlisted Soldiers in all situations:

• Positive attitude even under pressure
• Strong leadership skills and work ethic
• Strive for excellence and a problem solver

Thank you for your time and consideration. I believe my extensive expertise will help to achieve the outlined mission goals in the military. I will significantly contribute to the long-term success in the military.

Sincerely, Your Name

Feedback (Martha Klima-Gamble):

1. Dear William,
   • Perhaps add William’s info at the top. For example, what is his role? Hiring manager?
2. Military:
   • Is there an actual posting? Perhaps provide the link.

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